Elevator Pitch, the Sequel
1) The pitch.
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
I received a lot of feedback from both classmates and my friends about my last pitch and I felt that most of it was warranted. I was told that my attire was not professional enough, it was suggested that I perhaps wear something I’d wear to compete in a debate. For the most part, the feedback was positive from both groups, the most helpful comment was from Connor.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
I decided to specify a little more in this pitch as a “preliminary application” as suggested by Connor. If attention is focused on a single part of the idea there is a better chance it can be fleshed out and marketed. I also chose to dress more professionally, but that also has to do with the fact that I have full access to my closet now even though I didn’t earlier.
Jessica,
ReplyDeleteI listened to your first pitch and I think that this one was even better! I like the advice Connor gave as well and believe that targeting a specific segment (schools) instead of the entire market (every building in the US), is more realistic and is an amazing idea. It could be extremely beneficial to students, I hope you pursue this one day because I’d definitely download it.
Hey Jessica,
ReplyDeleteI love how you really analyzed your prior feedback and applied it to this pitch. You definitely look professional haha. You appear not only confident, but comfortable and knowledgeable giving your pitch. I think you did a great job at explaining your idea, the features, the benefits, etc. You spoke at a great pace and volume - as a viewer I felt involved and informed.